Wednesday, March 25, 2009

Nausea

Somehow you manage to worm your way into the recesses of my gut,

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          g,

                goading,

                      meddling

                           like a jackhammer in jello.

I don’t know why I play with you any more.

4 comments:

  1. eat me takes on new meaning when its your guts that are eating you from the inside out...

    nice visceral work here... I think you might have some experience with this jackhammer...

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  2. It takes some guts to write viscerally, Harlequin. It looks like you have some experience with this too.

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  3. the irony you can cut with a knife

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  4. Or twist with a pair of vicegrips.

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